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Chocolate Page 1 by ~Gum-Gum:iconGum-Gum:

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Submitted: January 3, 2008
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Resolution: 610×818
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Chocolate page 1 UP!! Guh I stayed up till 4 last night finishing this ^^;;; When i want to get somethign done I wanna get it DONE i hate leavign things for later : P
All night working on one page that only covers 4 lines of a 3 page fanfic XD

okay this is my first Doujin ever so i need some opinions and such~ I'm rather fond of transparency because I both hate blank white space and don't draw backgrounds very often (^^;), do you guys think its working out for this or is it just too vague?? Cuz I'll totally add one if its just too weird

Okay please comment what do you think? and I PROMISE LEE WILL GET CUTER ugh i don't like how he turned out TT__TT
I also apologize for my ridiculous handwriting XD

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EDITA~!!
you guys were all right, It was lee's cheek that was bugging me~ Ihated it when i penciled but just left it =__= and so i decided to rid the picture of it. I am actually a lot more pleased with it now that its gone, lee's cuteness is now increased by 15%!!!! XD
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~FoxPriestess:iconFoxPriestess: Jan 4, 2008, 12:14:51 AM
aw, this looks great!you might've wanted to flip the direction of the " I've got food in my mouth" cheek line from facing out to facing in x3; that migfht be whats bothering you. Gaara looks in character, which I lurrrve <3 <3 don't strain yourself trying to over cute-i-fy Lee x3 he's already cute enough. I'm also diggin this transparent thing you got goin o.o I don't think I've seen this used in a comic before...WHICH IS AWESOME! OO:<
~Yamizakuro:iconYamizakuro: Jan 4, 2008, 2:24:35 AM
Awww so cute~

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~acindra:iconacindra: Jan 4, 2008, 7:44:32 AM
Well, considering the story itself doesn't have much on the background, and the fact that it being transparent gives it this soft, warm feeling that white doesn't, transparent seems to be working extremely well. I agree with :iconfoxpriestess:, the cheek line is probably what's making him less cute.

In other news, it's adorable! I love the chocolate bag, it's been making me giggle for the whole time I've been trying to review. Also, I didn't know Gaara had earrings. O.O

I like the first panel with the leaves falling best, it suits Gaara too well.
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~Shitsugaikocu:iconShitsugaikocu: Jan 4, 2008, 10:49:07 AM
Lee looks so cuuute!

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*EsaNany:iconEsaNany: Jan 4, 2008, 11:22:01 AM
It looks very cute P:

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*Cruixe:iconCruixe: Jan 4, 2008, 1:09:03 PM
I LOOOVE IT! I love Gaara's profile like a lot.

Lee doesn't look un-cute. He looks fine...I think it's okay because he's not really supposed to be that cute...I mean he's not un-cute just....
Gah I don't know what I want to say.

I think it looks good. I love your style like a crazy lot.

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~SBA-fanyXD:iconSBA-fanyXD: Jan 4, 2008, 3:25:56 PM
maaah me the same when i color a drawing .. imlikei neeeed to do this right naooo xD and if not i cant stop thinking all the day that i have to color my draw or i finally end giving up to color it and i never color it

first doujin?? go! gum go!! i know you can!!

i like your handwriting or at least is betterthan mine!! xD

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~ThePiccoloPlayer:iconThePiccoloPlayer: Jan 4, 2008, 5:22:41 PM
D'aww! This is absolutely adorable! You had to add the earring, eh? -^w^-
Cory, don't beat yourself up on whether or not you make them cute. You are the Goddess of Cute. :D
I think I agree with :iconfoxpriestess: about the cheek thing. Have it facing inwards and it'll look like he's eating chocolate. :3
I wish you the best of luck on creating this doujin, Cory! :3
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Julie
~itig3r:iconitig3r: Jan 7, 2008, 8:10:50 PM
gum gum you are a cool cat :]] haha i love your drawings
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